Hi Tom, 第一次联系，如果对方 不是美国人的话还是别这么随意的好
I noticed your career page and company profile on linked-in and website.
Glad to know you on Linked-in.Through a visit to your website, we find you may interested in our XX product.
尽量控制I出现的次数，尽量采用客观语气。 I I I 的很容易令人产生压迫感。怎么找到客户的一语带过就可以不重要。也可以直接说： Glad to know you may on the market for XX, 重要的是接下来的话。
We are a custom plastic injecion molding factory in Shenzhen, China, dedicated to providing quality services for Precision Plastic Mold Design and Making, Plastic Injection(90T to 1000T) and Die Casting. Extensive years' experience as supplier of StanleyBlack&Decker, Euro-Pro, Media and many other contract manufactures makes us pride ourselves on delivering superior products.
As an XX years experienced XX factory in Shenzhen China and long-term supplier of XX and XX , we have been engaged in XX for years and recieved positive feedbacks both at home and abroad, so we
have the confidence to be your potential supplier.
避免直接罗列，表达要稍显一些层次。第一句就要抓人眼球，把大客户摆上来。有时候侧面烘托自己的实力更好。比如我改动的并没有说我们质量多么好，但第一句就提出，我们是XX公司的长期供应商。那我们的实力已经不言而喻。
Feel free to let us know what we can do for your production need, may a spark of interest lighten our friendship in the future.
Contact me, let's talk more about details.
We are looking forward to early cooperation.
亲，让客户看懂就可以了。不要用太复杂的句式。千万不要卖弄文采。很多讲英语的客户，英语都并非母语，你
写的晦涩了，他们看着也会吃力。
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