在对话标签中加入语气、嗓音、情感以及伴随动作,让你的描写更生动传神。
①in a/an + 形容词 + tone
②in a tone of + 名词
例句:
“You must be Annie,” he said in a friendly tone.
他用友好的语气说:“你一定是安妮吧。”
“I would love to,” said Emily in a pleasant tone.
艾米莉用愉快的语气说:“我很乐意。”
“I don’t want to,” said Emily in a tone of impatience.
艾米莉用不耐烦的语气说:“我不想。”
“No I didn’t,” he said in a low tone.
他压低声音说:“不,我没有。”
in a/an+形容词+voice
例句:
“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice.
“我不是故意的,”她低声喃喃道。
“I don’t know what you mean,” said Fran in a quavering voice.
“我不明白你的意思,”弗兰声音颤抖地说道。
He called out in a loud voice.
他大声喊道。
The woman at the desk greeted him in a bored voice.
桌边的女人用一种厌倦的腔调跟他打招呼。
①介词短语
in:
in surprise /shock /sorrow /horror /anger
with:
with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride /caution /care /patience /certainty
②副词
firmly /excitedly /seriously /sincerely /slowly /regretfully
例句:
“We’re not in trouble!” I shouted with joy.
“我们没惹上麻烦!”我欣喜地喊道。
“I hate you!” she screamed in anger.
她愤怒地尖叫道:“我恨你!”
“Is it true?” he whispered with astonishment.
“是真的吗?”他惊讶地低语道。
“I’ve been waiting for you,” she said with a smile.
“我一直在等你,”她微笑着说道。
“Get over here this instant!” David called fiercely.
“立刻给我过来!”大卫厉声喝道。
“It isn’t fair!” he exclaimed angrily.
“这不公平!”他愤怒地喊道。
“You are my hero!”Kylie said affectionately.
“你是我的英雄!”凯莉充满爱意地说道。
“I feel like you’re abandoning me,” she responded bitterly.
“我感觉你在抛弃我,”她苦涩地回应道。
“Nobody could understand me!” Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.
The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice, “It’s yours now.”
With her head down/With tears in her eyes, she said, “Sorry.”
“Hi, Sandy. I’m sorry about the spaghetti thing.” Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening.
“Want to try one on?” I said, touching Marina’s hand.
The woman in the car jumped out, screaming, “You idiot! Why didn’t you look where you were going?”
一、运用晨读板块的四个对话描写技巧,把下面的语篇补充完整。
As the twins looked around in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess and the kids’ gloomy faces, he immediately realized what they were up to. “Need any help?” 1 (爸爸微笑地看着双胞胎,温柔地问), who felt discouraged at being found screwing things up. Jeff stammered out their failed plan, 2 (他羞红了脸). “That’s a great idea. May I join you?” Father responded. At this, the twins cheered up and rolled up their sleeves to clean the stove before they learned to fry the bread following their father’s instructions. Soon came the delicious smell of French toast and chicken porridge, at which the twins felt a great sense of achievement. With everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Sitting up in confusion, mother was greeted with the kids’ smiling eyes and happy giggles. Before she could realize what was going on, the twins presented the breakfast tray, 3 (大声喊道), “Happy Mother’s Day!” 4 (惊讶地盯着精心准备的食物,妈妈饱含深情地说), “Thank you, darling. That’s the biggest surprise I’ve ever had!” It was then that Father entered, 5 (用赞许的口吻说),“That must be the best breakfast ever!” Mother bit into a piece of toast, nodding her head approvingly with great satisfaction. Exchanging glances, Father and the twins beamed brightly with pleasure.
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二、参考答案
1. Father gently inquired, smilingly looking at the twins
2. his face flushing with embarrassment
3. exclaiming in a loud voice
4. Staring at the carefully prepared food in wide-eyed surprise, Mother said affectionately
5. saying in an approving tone
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