大家伙晚上好,今天刚好看到Mrwhosetheboss这个博主测评小米17 Pro Max(某站也有视频),
那就来学习一下数码产品测评博主的话术,可复用到描述自己对数码产品的评价中,
或者大家拿起手边的材料一起学习吧~
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这个视频主要输出评价数码产品的地道表达,可复用场景,可以是跟同事的small talk,描述你使用某个数码产品的感受,甚至自己输出测评视频,也可以是口语考试中的描述某个物品。
首先,看看标题,还很会搞事情,
Xiaomi 17 Pro Max review - Apple are you seeing this!?
视频全场12多分钟,可能来不及都精细学完,咱们先看一部分。
【先抑后扬】这个博主的逻辑是,先说小米其实可以采取一些更加突出独特性的营销策略,但是又改了跟竞对的机型命名差不多的方式,后来想一想,其实是有道理的。
这种转折的句式要怎么说,这个可复用的场景应该还是蛮多的噢。
原文
So, I've been testing Xiaomi's nextG flagship phone, and you know, sometimes one phone company will copy another one, but change it up a little bit. Well, I've never seen a company change less than Xiaomi has here.They've adjusted the numbering on their phones to call them the 17s.They've shifted their naming structure to Pro and Pro Max.They've announced the phones a month early in September, all while featuring a very familiar-looking camera plateau design.Now, clearly, this is a marketing trick.This is all to make absolute sure that when you think about the iPhone 17 Pros that you also think and maybe even come across Xiaomi.And part of me thinks this is really not a good look that this kind of cheapens a brand that is otherwise clearly capable of making unique tech of their own.But then part of me completely gets here because when you actually take the bait and you put these phones side by side, it draws attention to the really unique things that Xiaomi is doing that no one else is.
复用句式
一方面我觉得这个不用非得怎么样,但是仔细一想,这么做还是有道理的,因为一对比,能体现出xxx的独特性。And part of me thinks this is really not a good look that this kind of cheapens a brand that is otherwise clearly capable of making unique tech of their own.But then part of me completely gets here because when you actually take the bait and you put these + (名词)产品 side by side, it draws attention to the really unique things that 某人 is doing that no one else is.
【开箱描述里面物品的句型】
So, if you bought a 17 Pro, this is what you'd get a super tall box with a charger,a 100 W charger casually in the box,the USBC cable,and a little insert which has the case,a lightly frosted hard shell.That's a pretty high tier package高级包装. And then this is the Pro Max, which has all the same stuff inside.
【产品卖点1 配置】
接下来,这个博主介绍了小米17的配置,除了常规的直接点出配置,
说这个配置多么多么先进,有两个地方说得挺有意思,
比喻来说明产品卖点
这个博主形容小米17的续航能力就像,妈妈给了很多零花钱,让他去买东西,很接地气的比喻。
6,300 mAh.That's a 25% bigger battery than the iPhone 17 Pro Max and even the Samsung Galaxy S25 Ultra.And so the Xiaomi 17 Pro Max, 7,500, 50% bigger than those other phones.And it translates翻译一下,就是再生动地描述一下,it is giving me stupid levels of endurance续航能力很强.I feel like I'm a kid again and I go into the candy store and my mom hands me $50 to spend.You could buy everything.And because it's achieved using a silicon carbon battery with the highest concentration of silicon so far, it's not made the phone any thicker or heavier.
对比来具体化产品优势
小米现在用的是别人明年用的。
These phones have 16 gigs of the fastest RAM I've ever seen on a phone.They've got the fastest storage and they're basically the first phones to have the new Snapdragon Elite Gen 5,which is the chip that will power most Android flagships next year.
【产品卖点3 摄像功能】
博主先说了自己对背面屏的看法,接着话锋一转,摄像功能让他非常惊艳。
But it's still just a slightly worse way of answering the call on the front of your phone cuz there's no mic at the back here.So, this part of the phone's functionality I'm not really sold on,especially considering that Xiaomi actually has their own version of Dynamic Island for secondary things like this.But the camera experience, which does also involve this rear screen, is oh my god.Okay, so the cameras on this phone,转折,折中观点句式 I wouldn't call them a breakthrough in themselves, but they're really good.对比句式The photos it takes are actually pretty much always as detailed as the iPhone 17 Pro Maxes, if not sometimes more, with also incredible dynamic range.
看到这里,大家有没有发现,这个博主一般说了坏的,他会转折说好的,说了好的,又会折中说点美中不足之处,估计是测评博主,所以还是要尽量保持客观的,可以学习这种辨证思考的口语句式。
OK,今天的输出就到这里啦,明天我们再见,大家也一起输出式学习吧~

