伙伴们好呀,今天继续输出式学习,
听到有小伙伴说背单词太枯燥,效果也不好,那要咋看文章啊。
背单词,如果只看中英文对照,很难有深刻印象,
就像AI没有上下文,生成的质量也不好。
也不懂怎么灵活应用。
这时候不如多输入一些上下文。
觉得看报纸杂志话题太严肃?那就看一些自己感兴趣的领域。
有些小伙伴用小说来学英语就是这个原理。
今天就来看看一个科技产品。
我比较喜欢逛Kickstarter,Indiegogo这种网站,
看看有什么创意新品,也不会太枯燥。
下面就来看看这些热销产品是怎么说故事的。
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产品简介
Naya Connect:模块化机械键盘生态系统
一点进首页,就看到这个键盘,Naya Connect,
可以根据自己的工作流(写代码、剪视频还是做3D建模)
来随意拼装这些模块。
光看文字想象不出来,直接看产品图,
原来这就是所谓的产品力。
好的产品自带广告效果啊。
专为开发者设计,还啥功能都有。
这里大家不妨给自己一个任务,
按照我们之前拆解过的故事框架,先简单口述一下,
或者写下来简单的框架,之后再对比,
这样印象更加深刻。
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可复用的句式框架
接下来具体拆解一下。
为了方便套用这个逻辑框架,我喜欢用一些缩略语来记这个框架。
现在加上有AI帮助,起名这块就很方便了。
可以把下面的几段文字总结为 "S.P.A.R.K"框架。
1. Success(用成功案例建立信任基石)
开篇信任背书,点出现有产品的不足之处
【过去的成绩】Three years ago, Naya Create became the fourth-biggest crowdfunding campaign in Dutch history.
【跟用户都相信同一个愿景】1,700 backers believed in a vision: that keyboards and mice haven't evolved with how we actually work.
【继续再接再厉】We delivered on that promise, with every single Naya Create unit shipped, and validated something important: modular input works.
可复用句式框架:
[Timeframe] ago, we launched [Product Name/Campaign].
[Number] users joined us on a mission to [Core Vision/Goal].
We delivered on that promise and validated that [Core Concept] works.
2. Painpoints(使用场景可视化)
具体场景要懂描述
People want their hands to stay on the keyboard. They want precision tools at home row. They want to stop breaking flow.
这三个痛点,光是看到双手不离键盘,
感觉我也需要这个产品了。
3. Admission(以退为进,用户反馈推动产品改进)
用户反馈引入产品的新卖点
【产品不适合任何人,先退一步】We always knew Create was not for everyone. The niche form factor, notable learning curve, and premium price point left a lot of people on the sidelines.
【用户不断反馈】The feedback was consistent: "I love the modules, but I'm not ready to commit to re-learning how to type". Create was just the beginning.
很妙啊这一段,用户反馈一般都是负面的,
用挫折变成了产品升级的引子了。
可复用句式框架:
·We always knew [Old Product/Approach] was not for everyone.
·The [Limitation 1] and [Limitation 2] left a lot of people on the sidelines.
·The feedback was consistent: "I love [Feature A], but I'm not ready to [Pain Point/Effort]."
4. Revolution(介绍产品功能,降低风险,促进行动)
基于用户反馈,真实的开发升级
【迎来光明-产品升级】Welcome Naya Connect.
Connect is the evolution of everything we learned from Create.
Building on three years of module development, community feedback, andreal-world use. We kept the modular system that people loved.
经常看小说的伙伴应该会有种预测剧情的感觉,
前面看到冲突挫折,就会隐隐有种预感马上要讲怎么解决问题,
接下来就是迎来光明了,语气也比较热烈。
产品介绍可以用到再看【介绍产品】Combined with a familiar, low-profile, customizable and premium build mechanical keyboard: Naya Type. And an ecosystem of snap-on Attachments: Naya Multipad and Naya 6-Key.
可复用句式框架:
[New Product] is the evolution of everything we learned from [Old Product/Past Experience].
Building on [Timeframe] of [Specific Effort/Development], we kept [Beloved Feature] and improved [Weakness].
5. Keystone(愿景升华)
升华愿景理念
The idea is simple: Start with what you need now and expand over time. Use modules with your current keyboard via the Dock.
Or go all-in with Naya Type for the full integrated ecosystem.
Either way, you're not locked in, you're connected.
Modular input shouldn't be a luxury just for不应该独属于xxx the committed few. Everyone deserves a tailor made solution.
That's the vision that Naya Connect is built upon.
最后还是熟悉的升华愿景,
shouldn't be a luxury just for这个句型能迁移的场景比较广。
可复用句式框架:
[Core Value/Feature] shouldn't be a luxury just for [Specific Group/The Few].
Everyone deserves [Promised Solution/Outcome].
That's the vision that [Product Name] is built upon.
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OK,今天的输出就到这。
输出巩固学习质量,还能沉淀自己的知识库。
如果你也想试试输出式学英语,可以找我一起共学输出,
一起用英语学知识,沉淀自己的知识库~

